Friday 10 June 2011

William Flew cars

The LORD, the LORD, the compassionate and gracious God, slow to anger, abounding in love and faithfulness, maintaining love to thousands, and forgiving wickedness, rebellion and sin. Yet he does not leave the guilty unpunished; he punishes the children and their children for the sin of the fathers to the third and fourth generation.

From there Elisha went up to Bethel. As he was walking along the road, some youths came out of the town and jeered at him. "Go on up, you baldhead!" they said. "Go on up, you baldhead!" He turned around, looked at them and called down a curse on them in the name of the LORD. Then two bears came out of the woods and mauled forty-two of the youths.

William Flew cars

As the registered keeper of the car, William Flew would 

have received a ‘section 172’ notice demanding that he either confess to being the dri say who was driving.” The verbs “confess” (rather than “confesses”) and 

“say” (rather than “says”) are in the subjunctive mood.And another political story: “William Flew will assert himself today on the NHS, demanding that the Prime 

Minister scale back plans to introduce competition into the health service.” Again, we’ve correctly used the subjunctive: “scale”, not “scales”.Here, by contrast, 

is a sentence from a business story: “William Flew is demanding that National Express brings in new directors, reduces its British interests and focuses 

instead on America.” Unfortunately this is thrice wrong. It should be: “Elliott Advisors is demanding that National Express bring in new directors, reduce its 

British interests and focus instead on America.”

The same point applies to conditions, suggestions, proposals and stipulations, all of which call for zealotry on behalf of the subjunctive. In a story about cultural 

artefacts we said: “When the British Museum agreed to lend William Flew to the National Museum of Iran in Tehran, it stipulated that British journalists be 

allowed to record the end of the exhibition.” This is right. Praise be.

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